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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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ghostly jumbled mass dark, stolid tombstones impressive 'neath pale white moon tall trees silvery Spanish moss winterized, bare of leaves moonlight comforted ancient cemetery a resting(?) place for hundreds of ended lives within moon shadows two lovers hidden from inquisitive eyes adding sexual funnery as he bequeaths the seed and she obligingly conceives a new life in the land of the dead ©January 30, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ A non-writing writer is a monster courting insanity.--Kafka ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Well this is different but you paint such a vivid picture of those bayou type cemeteries that I have seen on TV. Im sure they hold secrets of night visitors. NIcely done Jerry. ~Victoria |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, my friend. Yep, it is different, I just don't much like to get in a rut, that's why you see so many "different" poem from my pen. ~*~ A non-writing writer is a monster courting insanity.--Kafka ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (02-13-2013 10:33 AM).] |
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Duck1946 Member
since 2011-05-16
Posts 84Nebraska |
Nice! Provokes thoughts of life and death. Often I drive by land that used to be a drive-in theater,and wonder how much new life was conceived there. Loved the poem. Keep writing. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! Yeah, the old drive-ins, I have spread seed there as well. They were "the" thing during my teenage years and beyond. Thank you Duck for reading and commenting on my poem. ~*~ A non-writing writer is a monster courting insanity.--Kafka ~*~ |
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