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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2013-02-12 12:54 PM

Deep in the core of our hearts
are promises, secrets, and desires
buried in the sands of time,
and within the shell of our body
is another person waiting
to emerge and breathe
the essence of tomorrow;
Waiting for a slight zephyr to lift
and invite us to fly within the winds
of breathlessness like a baby sparrow
upon the wingspan of freedom,
inhaling the serenity of a new day.
They say we all have a twin;
a twin within us, aching to be introduced.

~Victoria

Be not ashamed of mistakes and thus make them crimes.
Confucius

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-02-12 01:04 PM

Oh, I hear you on this one, Victoria. There is no doubt that we are endowed with another person within our very being. It awaits its chance to emerge and show us what it can do, and often times it get that chance if the original person allows it. Hope you understand what I'm saying, I feel I'm ramblin'.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-02-12 01:09 PM

No you are not rambling Jerry...Im glad you can relate to my words. As long as there is only one person inside of us. I guess some of us can have many.

~Victoria

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2013-02-13 01:31 AM

hi victoria, this marks a beautiful hope, everyone can find, the poem is an excellent invitation to move and be positive, how sweet and delicate,
enjoyed a lot

yann

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2013-02-13 11:19 AM

Thank you so much Yann for your supportive responses.

always nice to hear from you.

~Victoria

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2013-02-20 11:49 PM

I know I have a twin, or is it a clone...James

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2013-02-21 07:59 AM

Thanks for peeking in James.

~Victoria

Duck1946
Member

since 2011-05-16

Posts 84
Nebraska

7 posted 2013-02-26 04:11 AM

My inner self thinks he is Brad Pitt.
I have to keep reminding him that no pretty heads are going to be looking our direction if we did walk into that bar.
Excellent poem, keep writing!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2013-02-26 07:51 AM

Thank you so much. The bars are for the young people. People looking for what they don't have or what they think they don't have...its all about self confidence and if you think you are Brad Pitt then Im Angela Jolie haa...

~Victoria

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