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Open Poetry #48

avalanche of eventual

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2013-02-09 07:47 AM

and then that avalanche of eventualities
cascading down as windows with blinds
hand drawn before my eyes in pencil thin
no painted expressions or sculpted dreams

no strings attached that might be tugged
into moth wing sensation sounds around
to capture a glance dancing too quiet
as do tongueless shoes, without souls

I tap a rhythm on tin women made of paper
just to watch the ripples on their skin
and imagine them as other kinds of eyes
yes, a kinder kind of eyes glassing over

then rolling upward into wanting, eventually

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daark

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

1 posted 2013-02-09 11:44 PM

This is really interesting, and has great depth I liked very much

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2013-02-11 01:14 PM

Cool poem, gentleman friend...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2013-02-11 01:25 PM

Olias, thank you guy.

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Babyblue, thank you sexy eyes.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2013-03-08 12:56 PM

quote:
no strings attached that might be tugged
into moth wing sensation sounds around
to capture a glance dancing too quiet
as do tongueless shoes, without souls

Such incredibly enthralling and fascinating imagery!

How nice to discover that you have visited the blue pages recently, Poet.

Margherita

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2013-03-08 01:59 PM

I love this poem so much that I saved it. No one plays with words as you do. So much here that I like, D.

Ali-san

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2013-03-10 07:08 PM

fine writing...James

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

7 posted 2013-03-30 10:59 PM

Wow I forgot how much I love this site ... I really missed this place....need to quit leaving ....

~~~kingsangel~~~

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