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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2013-02-08 06:46 PM

My kindred spirit, unto thee I have sought,
and embrace thy love in thine eyes.
The search for love hast been but naught;
thou art a bright star in the skies.

Be thou forever my heart of all hearts,
within thine arms my armored knight.
Whilst memories of past loves shalt depart,
beyond the halo of moonlight.

Thyself is not a vain dim witted wench,
but a temptress breathes in my soul.
Whilst dream of thy kiss I shalt clench;
tis' strings of mine heart doth toll.

My feathered quill, is as sharp as thy sword;
Whilst seductive words shalt melt thee My Lord.

~Victoria

Be not ashamed of mistakes and thus make them crimes.
Confucius

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-02-08 06:58 PM

Somebody has been at the writing desk and what has evolved from that desk is a wonder to behold. I liked this so much I've read it three times. You know how to make the words count, Victoria . . ..

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-02-08 07:49 PM

Thank you so much Jerry...Means alot coming from you...I alway enjoy writing these Shakespearean Sonnets I guess because I don't write them that often.

~Victoria

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2013-02-09 09:20 AM

Loved the last two line, my friend ... very nicely done.

j.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2013-02-09 01:27 PM

Thank you Jimmy...and for your kind comments.

nice to hear from you.

~Victoria

Be not ashamed of mistakes and thus make them crimes.
Confucius

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2013-02-11 02:00 AM

Well methinks the armored knight has no chance against thy feathered quill...for seductive words have been reducing a well-fitted armor into a heap on a floor for centuries...lol.

Now this I like, all this talk about knights and maidens stirs my inner longings for some medieval romantic action...or current...not much different, after all...heh.

CG

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

6 posted 2013-02-11 05:51 AM

Ignore this I sorted the problem .... I-pads are not pip talk friendly

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

7 posted 2013-02-11 06:14 AM

Sorry Victoria, if you got my reply to VAS' comment, my copy and paste had a will of its own this morning and is copying to whatever window it chooses. I can't edit this out because the threads aren't updating, so I'm screwed.

Well what I mean't to write to you is that I enjoyed the read and the flow of this piece.

So now I'll reset my cookies clear my history and try again.... Oh and maybe go to work.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2013-02-11 08:04 AM

CG...You will have to get yourself a suit of amour...and find a damsel in distress.ha
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.

Olias...Yes you don't want to be late for work...Thanks for all the comments ha.and hope you get your ipad all fixed.

~Victoria

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