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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I should always remember the casual of your eyes like the chill of september when she whispers across some quiet afternoon without footprints they were a puppy place, to play with occasional the empty hand kind, where fingers were strangers and then joined into some musical pretending you looked back over your shoulder often, after as if you had something written on your nudity and wanted to be sure I was reading every word you would even slow down sometimes and wait there like your steps were a comma placed for my pause and maybe I would catch up to you more quickly to make a few changes into a storybook ending ______________ daark |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hi stranger~ I love this line, and the perfect pause it gave me... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ like your steps were a comma placed for my pause ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh baby I love your ways!!  Missed you D~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Babyblue...thank you lady friend |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Have missed your word stories. Love this one. Ali |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Goddess of oatmeal, thank you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Ingenious write! Captivating in every line. Margherita |
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