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LorienLord
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since 2013-02-03
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Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2013-02-06 06:55 PM


Too many years
have I thrown myself
against your window pain.

But the glass is too strong
you will never get out
and I will never get in.

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KJOTT
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since 2012-12-26
Posts 87
Canada
1 posted 2013-02-06 07:15 PM


If you can't get through you can often get around instead!
Nice and poignant.

OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
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Pearl city Iowa
2 posted 2013-02-06 07:53 PM


I liked this very much.
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
3 posted 2013-02-06 09:46 PM


Excellent poetry! Welcome to The Blue Room . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2013-02-07 10:16 PM


Welcome to Passions, Lorien.

Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2013-02-09 09:03 PM


Nice...James
Marchmadness
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So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2013-02-10 04:59 AM


Welcome, Lorien. Love poem.
                         Ida

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