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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2013-01-27 11:18 PM



She had a shadows rumor
The one that followed after a nights lost thoughts after a winter fury

She had long leggings
Based off the walls cries
The woman who talked
Felt the seasons duck and weave

Her neck glanced towards
The month of may
With her hair riding down her back
Like a velvet rope sewing its way
Towards the living room

He use to touch a piece of her leg
For he didn't want to lose a piece of her spread
The way her legs read each others toes across the living room floor
She had a soft cheek
Like the rails of a bed
As the sunrise set against their silver lining frame

soft reddison eyes
Under the fall  crescent
That touched the fire below the
Patient side of the woman's left side breast

They had eyes of a silver dollar
On the doorstep of her grandmothers home

She walked towards dahlia lane with her big brown eyes and blonde locks like the oceans current

The one she use to live nearby when she grew on the country land and her father dug his hands deep into the soil

in the forefront of her hair that spread across her back like the black
Haven that she wore when she passed the wrong left and her eyes focused on the backstory of a village not too far from the snows constant

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Victoria
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1 posted 2013-01-28 09:00 AM


Her neck glanced towards
The month of may
With her hair riding down her back
Like a velvet rope sewing its way
Towards the living room

Enjoyed Dahlia Ln. Tomer and your unique abstraction of words.

~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
2 posted 2013-01-28 03:21 PM


Victoria-

Your comments are always welcome.  Happy you enjoyed that particular stanza.  Hope you're well.

Cheers

Tomer

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