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Open Poetry #48

Two Souls Challenge

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2013-01-27 01:47 PM

Two souls entangled in a web of love
lost within the winds of eternity;
Drifting like sweet roses of burgundy;
forgiving the wounds of the heart.
The jealous moon pulling them apart,
but forever a celestial work of art.
Until the stars no longer shine
the fragrance of their love will bloom
in the afterglow of a nebula vine.

http://apod.nasa.gov/apod/ap121029.html
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[This message has been edited by Victoria (01-27-2013 08:05 PM).]

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2013-01-27 03:10 PM

Nice writing.

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2013-01-27 03:47 PM

Victoria, you have such a rich mind's eye, that shows through in your writing. Nice!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2013-01-27 05:14 PM

Thank you J. and TD..Vas got me out of my writers block and so did RS...its been fun.

~Victoria

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2013-01-27 06:50 PM

Wow, you are on a roll. This is awesome.

Margherita

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2013-01-27 07:26 PM

Yes I got my quota of poems in today for a change...it was a fun day Margherita...
Thank you for peeking in. HUGSS

~Victoria

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