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KJOTT
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since 2012-12-26
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Canada

0 posted 2013-01-26 06:40 PM


O! pre-Bang silence, as they say in Oslo,
or would if they listened — in borrowed verse —

Swimming spaceless.
Beyond the stretch
where vision is blindness —
where photons tumble like Phaethon
from his chariot afire.

When time is that archetypical echo of rhymed nothingness
Pulsing through ALL verse
Unfulfilled nothingness
Unfulfillable

Except to those who glisten
and mark the eye-sparkle of we between the beats.

The authors of such co-labours as these.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2013-01-27 08:25 AM


Welcome to Pip, dear Kevin!

Your words are quite intriguing, I enjoyed the read and its warning message.

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
uk
2 posted 2013-01-27 11:02 AM


Post-bang thoughts are awaiting.

RS

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