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Amberzlynnc
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since 2010-08-24
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0 posted 2013-01-25 06:48 PM



I want to fill my life with souls like yours-
Who prove me wrong and help me grow inside
Who help me find the keys to unlock doors
Whose minds fill up by being open wide
I want to fill my life with souls untied

-Amber

© Copyright 2013 Amber Corcoran - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2013-01-25 06:51 PM


This is a grand way to think and to look at life, Amberzlynnc. If everyone were as honest about learning from others this would be a considerably better world. I liked this openness . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2013-01-25 07:32 PM


Sweet sentiment, just be careful...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2013-01-26 12:45 PM


Yes, this is a beautiful rendering of a core-wish of your heart. Open mindedness helps to evolve, I agree.

Margherita

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