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Open Poetry #48

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2013-01-23 02:28 PM

.

Somewhere
A door
Must have
Been left open

I have no idea
How you got in
This far

Standing there
In a corridor
To my rooms at home
In a long wool coat
A white knit cap on
Your short blond hair

There is
A flurry of activity
And mutual acting
As if this were
Not a miracle
And wholly unaware
Of what it portends

Oh you’ve been trouble
From the first moment
I met you

And now here you are
In a dream

.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2013-01-23 02:36 PM

This is so very vivid that I felt part of the dream, like watching a very good movie scene that brings emotion, even if no sounds are perceived.

Beautiful.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-01-23 03:26 PM

Ain't dat just the way it is sometimes. Dreams are worse. In real life you can beat a hasty retreat to sob your blues down your chin, but in the dreams they'll follow you everywhere.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2013-01-24 05:42 PM

A dream frozen in eternity. A haunting beauty.
Ida

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