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Open Poetry #48

Sadness

Amberzlynnc
Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 229
New Jersey

0 posted 2013-01-22 01:16 AM

Cigarettes and soda and sedentary ways
Ashtrays and anger and aching every day
Doubtful, dishonest and dark as if you've died
But I must recall that this is only just one side.

-Amber

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2013-01-22 02:16 AM

Great write, love that last line!!
A little sliver of optimism, the
possibility for change.

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

2 posted 2013-01-22 02:46 AM

Nicely done!
Kat >^..^<

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2013-01-22 11:03 AM

Nicely said Amber, some of us have a dark side but a sensitive side too. Enjoyed.

~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-01-23 01:51 PM

Haha! Yes, I suppose you must, but that was the side that mattered the most I have a feeling. Good stuff . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2013-01-23 02:28 PM

Excellent flash of your state of mind, dear Amber.

So did you go for a healthy walk today?

Hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2013-01-24 05:49 AM

Always a blessing to see both sides, Amber.
Ida

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