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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. It makes you afraid To be so exposed All these colors And movements Almost hurt your eyes Here There are crowds For whom living is a given No one here dwells On killing themselves From dawn to dusk And into the night It's all So very new for you An absence of darkness At least alone In your windowless cell There was always a place to hide Then out of the plane For which you've been waiting Dressed in a suit He finally arrives Suddenly frail And gaunt with anguish Again a girl You come to his arms A familiar being The young man Who loves you Your only connection To this world of light . |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
I enjoyed reading the piece, it brought some scenes of forgotten love to mind like a daughter seeing her father for the first time in what seems like ages ago. RS |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
enjoyed this . jo |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow... I hope the light will always shine upon her, and that she embraces it. It's so easy to turn back to a familiar darkness, rather than overcome the anxieties that come with a new beginning. Michael |
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