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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2013-01-16 04:14 PM

Moonlight serenade whispers in the night
magically you enter my dream,
Your painting upon the cloud of my pillow;
blending like two ripples of a stream.
Enchantment of soft loving lips,
stirring the palette of my soul.
The harmony of lilac eyes and blue,
as love of two hearts become whole.

There beside you, cradled within your arms;
I hear the call of the wild in the breeze,
as soft lips of cherry discreetly kiss,
shadows of night tremble within the trees.
The painting of the night hauntingly fades,
within dreamscape of moonlight serenade.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-01-16 04:43 PM

Ah, Victoria, dreams such as this are to forever be remembered. You write so vividly and sensuous, it carries the reader right along within the dream. I know it did me, and those "soft lips of cherry" were deliciously exquisite.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-01-16 05:07 PM

Thank you Jerry,That means alot coming from you. Glad you enjoyed my words.

~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2013-01-17 02:36 PM

Great write!
And, I bet Glenn Miller would agree with
the sentiment you have expressed.

Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2013-01-17 02:46 PM

I looked up the song and at last I found one that was written before I was born ha!

Thanks J.

~Victoria

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2013-01-17 03:32 PM

Haahaaa....
Yeah, me too, but the "Big Band Era" music
is a favorite of mine.

Again, great write!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2013-01-18 09:41 AM

wow, what have i been missing!!! I hope life has been kind to you ///

Barry/ magnus

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2013-01-18 09:48 AM

I just asked Maureen the other day about you, you must have been ease dropping. So nice to hear from you again.Well im not getting any younger thats for sure ha!

~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

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