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Eternity Bleeds
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Eternity Bleeds |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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Catch a grain of sand in your hand, Cast it t'ward the sky like a seed, Hear it when the grain does crash land, And 'ere you Eternity bleeds. ©December 29, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Good morning Jerry, nice to be reading your wise words again. Enjoyed. Reminds me of that poem about the little birdie in the sky flying high. ~Victoria |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Victoria for your kind words, I so every so much appreciate them. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Your writing is becoming more compact, but just as great as ever. You are making my brain-cells activate into contemplation. Excellent write, my friend!! JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Many thanks, JL, you really know how to turn it on, and I am grateful that you do. We who write thrive on the accolades of fellow poets, so your words are doubly rewarding. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks James...Jerry ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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