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Duck1946
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since 2011-05-16
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0 posted 2013-01-13 10:25 AM

Dictated to me by my six-year-old greatgrand daughter: Harley
I love you
You love me
Will you marry me?
Oh please, Oh please
We should get married.
I will marry you.
Will you marry me?
Yes, I will.
You look beautiful>
He opened the door.
They got married.
They had children
the next day.
And they kissed
Goodnight>
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Victoria
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1 posted 2013-01-13 10:37 AM

Thank you for sharing Mr. B. A sweet moment with your Great-Granddaughter. Loved it.

~Victoria
latearrival
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2 posted 2013-01-13 11:17 AM

Sweet and to the point.I love the way little minds cut to the chase and say it  like it is. enjoyed,jo
Duck1946
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3 posted 2013-01-27 08:24 AM

Thank you for reading Harley's poem!
Margherita
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4 posted 2013-01-27 07:21 PM

Oh, this is so sweet. That's a very promising beginning of a poet's career!

Margherita
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