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Victoria
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0 posted 2013-01-06 11:41 PM



They were two ships passing in the night,
beneath the bouquet of the moon.
She fell in love within his eyes of blue,
and the warm harborage of his arms.
But he was gone, by the dawn,
of the moody morning light.
Seduced by the charm of destiny.
He was the gypsy in the breeze,
and he was born to be free,
within the gales, and sails
of the vagabond wind.
Free as a seagull upon a vessels brim;
They were two ships passing in the night.
He was gone, by the moody morning light.




Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare



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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2013-01-07 11:43 AM


Yea, the light of day drives it all home!!

This was kind of sad but I really enjoyed the ocean view!

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2 posted 2013-01-07 01:49 PM


Thank you Lori, as long as you didn't get seasick ha! thanks for peeking in today.

~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2013-01-08 09:27 AM


I have felt this in my past V,

Sometimes I wish I was closer to the ocean, just for the memories.


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4 posted 2013-01-08 09:58 AM


Thank you for peeking in as I always love hearing from you. Hugss!!
~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

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5 posted 2013-01-08 06:00 PM


"and he was born to be free,
within the gales, and sails
of the vagabond wind."

Love this verse!
Excellent, Victoria.

JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Victoria
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6 posted 2013-01-08 06:27 PM


Nice to hear from you J. Glad you enjoyed.
Thanks for peeking in.

~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

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7 posted 2013-01-09 09:41 AM


So neat to read, could really hear this as a song...wonderful
Victoria
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8 posted 2013-01-09 01:38 PM


Thank you so much Amaryllis. I looked up your name and it is a beautiful flower which I didnt know before. I guess I learn something everyday in here.
~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

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