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OwlSA
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0 posted 2013-01-06 07:01 PM



BURDENED BREATH
7  January 2013

A sorrowing heart
that’s heavier than storm clouds
crying frozen tears.

Owl

© Copyright 2013 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
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1 posted 2013-01-06 07:06 PM


Oh Dear Diana,Now we are both shedding  tears tonight. Please read "Til Then" and read what our Richy dedicated to me. jo
Nikola
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2 posted 2013-01-06 07:08 PM


So few words, but their power is undoubtedly felt.
OwlSA
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3 posted 2013-01-06 07:22 PM


Martyjo, thank you, for your sweet, sweet kindness.  Thank you also for directing me to Richy's beautiful poem about your daughter.  I read it and wrote a comment there.

Thank you, Nikola, for your kind words.

Owl

latearrival
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4 posted 2013-01-07 01:26 AM


thank you Diana. Richy has been wonderful and I love the  poem he wrote as a healing balm for both himself and for me. jo
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2013-01-08 09:35 AM


many times you write my feelngs


M

Marchmadness
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6 posted 2013-01-09 04:31 AM


So sorry you are hurting, Diana.
                                Ida

OwlSA
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7 posted 2013-01-11 12:58 PM


Maureen, thanks for the hug and I am sorry you feel this way sometimes, but I am glad that my poem reminds you that you are not alone in feeling this way.

Thank you for your kindness and compassion, Ida.

Owl

Duck1946
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8 posted 2013-01-11 07:43 AM


Sorry for your sad feelings.
Those sad feelings were well illustrated in your lovely poem.

OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa
9 posted 2013-01-11 07:48 AM


Thank you, Duck.  

However, your brilliant and delightful one about you, your wife, your darling kitty cat, Mr Peapers and your home, certainly helped to cheer me up.  Smiles.

Owl

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