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Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2013-01-02 09:34 PM

Far off midst clear
yawning beryl skies,billowing
clouds bump along behind
leafless trees,spectral dark.
Lonely,quiet, save for
gulls aching cries dying
on the cold wind.
Afternoon drags dark veils
across the evening starsheet.
Sitting,feeling alone,isolated
but warm,winter visits
upon wind blast,inside
rain splash, until my
heart beats with it,
like natures winter heart.

music was my refuge.i could crawl into the spaces between the notes and curl my back to loneliness - Maya Angelou

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (01-03-2013 10:14 AM).]

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2013-01-02 10:42 PM

Enjoyed your words Goldenrose. Winter can be depressing but writing poems keep you sane ha. Happy New Year.

~Victoria

Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can.
-- Danny Kaye

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2013-01-03 07:17 PM

Your poetry is almost quiet, I truly enjoy the stillness that surrounds your thoughts, almost as if they are airbrushed....
and yet your visuals are loud and clear, and beautifully painted.

Just lovely, Goldenrose~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2013-01-04 11:40 PM

oh how I wish I could stay here all night and read you...but hubby will be home soon and dinner needs cooking

but tomorrow is another day

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2013-01-05 10:48 AM

Phil, so nice to see you here.

I love the peaceful feeling I get from reading you this morning and especiall these words which would make a beautiful Title:"natures winter heart".

M ( p.s. would you allow me the use of the words for a title acknowleging they came from you?) It's the first inspiration I have had in a very long time.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

5 posted 2013-01-05 11:55 AM

Thank you to all who have replied..

M yes of course you may use the title and i am pleased to have inspired you to write again.

Goldenrose.

music was my refuge.i could crawl into the spaces between the notes and curl my back to loneliness - Maya Angelou

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2013-01-09 05:02 AM

Glad to see you writing again, Phil. Always enjoy.
Ida

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

7 posted 2013-01-09 09:35 AM

Yes, peaceful and pensive...great write

A

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2013-01-10 12:02 PM

I especially love..."Afternoon drags dark veils
across the evening starsheet."...
You are in grand voice GR.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

9 posted 2013-01-10 04:31 PM

I liked the imagery. Nice write.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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