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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2012-12-31 06:25 PM

I Wear You
like
Sweet grapes of wine
lingering on
tip of my tongue.

A Cherished Locket,
close to the beating
of my heart.

I Wear You
like
A Purple Orchid
laced with mountain rain,
adorned in flaxen hair.

A Gentle Kiss
of a magnolia breeze,
in the afterglow of love.

I Wear You
like
A Silk Sarong
over the shoulder,
of a memory.

I Wear You

Bathing in the fragrance
Blue
Forget- Me- Nots Bouquet.

Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can.
-- Danny Kaye

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2012-12-31 06:28 PM

I Wear You
like
A Silk Sarong
over the shoulder,
of a memory.

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Absolutely beautiful, V!!!! I'm so loving those lines... your poetry is a breath of fresh air...and then some.

Hugs~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2012-12-31 06:48 PM

Thank you Lori and lots of happiness in the new year and good fortune to you too. I do appreciate your sweet and supportive comments. Hugss!!

~Victoria

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

3 posted 2012-12-31 07:10 PM

oh my lord Victoria, that is one of the sweeter things ive read in.. well forever..

your heart is a bloom.. with cherish and enchantment, flourishing forth amour, and allurement..

wonderful this, and the hand that penned it..

you brought this year to a divine consumation.. with balm and bouquet, lingering.. ever so

how nice to share another year, in gift of treasured, and endearing thoughts..

2013, its almost here!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2012-12-31 08:44 PM

Now how can I top that response Richy.
Impossible...Your responses are so much better then my poems ha! Hope you have a great new years eve. I hope you stick around here and keep on tangoing ha.

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2012-12-31 09:22 PM

hahah you are so funny.. well i do come and go rather frequently but i always do come back to bother you all from time to time whether you like it or not lol..

in the meanwhile, as far as that dance is concerned, it still takes two to do it justice yes..

so take my my hands now and lets dance whats left of this year away..

the moon is peaking behind a cloud.. but the darkness is winking its starry night..

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2012-12-31 10:06 PM

I can't find a dress with a split up the side...I don't know what to do.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2012-12-31 10:50 PM

so sweet

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

8 posted 2012-12-31 11:19 PM

hey dont make me rip it with my teeth cause i will..

oh dang, i just cut my lipth on thth roseth buthsh hahaha..

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2012-12-31 11:27 PM

Thank you Ms Shadows, Happy new year to you and yours. Nice to hear from you.

Richy...It sounds like you had too many sangrias haa.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

10 posted 2013-01-01 12:42 PM

I'm truly sorry Victoria if i went too far, no sangria here, i've actually been sick in bed for the last two days, i just get caught up in all the revery sometimes.. if i was disrespectful in anyway i sincerely apologize and i hope you can forgive me

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

11 posted 2013-01-01 01:10 AM

Lovely poem, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

12 posted 2013-01-01 08:21 AM

Thank you Kat and Happy New Year to you and yours.

Richy...I hope you feel better, no you werent disrespectful. You had me laughing.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

13 posted 2013-01-01 12:09 PM

oh okay.. whewww! haha.. thanks Victoria i was worried that i might have offended you.. i will promise to not go soooo overboard though next time okay.. did i ever tell you that you're the best, because you are! Hey it's 2013! How nice it is to be able to start, another year, especially with such nice folks as you and everyone else here at Pip Have a wonderful day!

nate15106
Junior Member

since 2013-01-01

Posts 11
Pittsburgh, PA

14 posted 2013-01-01 04:14 PM

I really enjoyed this poem.
Very beautiful

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

15 posted 2013-01-01 04:57 PM

Ah, much enjoyed this, my friend ... nice concept!

j.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

16 posted 2013-01-01 06:31 PM

Nate..Thank you for reading and I am so glad you enjoyed. Happy New Year

Jimmy..It is always nice to hear from you.

Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can.
-- Danny Kaye

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