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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2012-12-28 10:01 PM



Tis the new chapter
That brings a new abide
Tis a new Moon
bringing dreams from insideā€¦

Now I dream the dreams
That were so elusive
To chime into life
All new illusions

I wish to follow
The nearest whim and while
To scatter my interests
Into ever bigger smiles

Then book it all, space it all
In word and photo and share
To delve into the deepest thought
And bless it all with care.

Dear, dear Moon,
Smile with me
Share the light
I share with thee.

*~*

12-28-12 (c) KRJ


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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
1 posted 2012-12-29 12:54 PM


there is some intimacy that i live so much, the moon seems like a real friend and the poem works great, loved it,


yann



BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2013-01-02 02:47 PM


Then book it all, space it all
In word and photo and share
To delve into the deepest thought
And bless it all with care.

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Just so nice!  Would be a great beginning or ending of a book.  
Either way it's a reflection of a gentle pen and kind heart.


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