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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2012-12-27 04:23 PM

There's a fire inside
and the night is storming.
Our eyes meet and divert
sadly
we've forgotten how to dance
how to withstand the test of time.

...I stumble and fall
lost in the sparkle of shadows
as the lights dim
and my memory fades.
Tracing the lines of your grey temples
timidly
touching my mind
but the words won't come.

That heady feeling,
like tiny bubbles
rise to the occasion.
Reminds me
when I got lost in you
only to find myself,
wishing I were more savy
more in tune
more dressed for the occasion
that you might notice
the shade of blue.

Tear drops dangle
like diamonds
reflecting the light
beveled in the pane.
The long stemmed crystal flutes
are engraved with your name
and I am just dizzy enough
to search out your eyes
and feel the flutter.
Picking up the tempo
where my heart left off.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2012-12-27 05:17 PM

Its always hard to pick up where one leaves off isnt it? I enjoyed reading your words Lori, and I really like your new photo too.
Hugsss!!!Hope to read more real soon.

~V~

Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can.
-- Danny Kaye

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2012-12-27 08:22 PM

very well 'penned' indeed!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2012-12-27 09:02 PM

Well, if there truly ever were love letters written in the sand,
this would be the cause, and the cure…
for the tiny bubbles, that is.

Love this Blues!! A beauty.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Nikola
Junior Member

since 2012-12-25

Posts 15

4 posted 2012-12-27 10:55 PM

This flowed really well.

"The long stemmed crystal flutes"

Beautiful.

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

5 posted 2012-12-28 12:29 PM

ALways enjoy your posts.Good to see your smiling face too. jo

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2012-12-28 07:02 AM

very emotional and poetic, loved the images ,

yann

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2012-12-28 12:55 PM

V~ thank you so much for your "knowing" replies.  You're a sweetie!

dreampoet~  I'm happy to know you were here.  Happy New Year to you.

JL~ Your replies are so poetic and I appreciate them and you very much.
Does my heart good to share these pages with you.

Nikola~ Thanks for stopping by.  I'm glad to see you are
enjoying your time here.  I'm keeping an eye out for your poetry.

Jo~ Thank you for being so supportive of my work.
Your kind words mean a lot.  All the best in the 2013.

Yann~  Very much appreciate you reading my poem.  Thank you Sir~

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

8 posted 2012-12-28 01:49 PM

Dear Bluesy - So romantic and beautiful. Always such stunning writes from your pen and I always look forward to them. They make me want to see beauty again instead of ... hmm? perhaps the truth.

Hope 2013 is happy and healthy for you.

Love
Helen

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

9 posted 2012-12-28 02:54 PM

aww gosh what a beautiful new picture Lori you look sooo happy, i think its my new favorite of your's

i know ive said it before but its so wonderful to see how far your poetry has evolved over time.. its always been great but it just keeps getting better.. i really enjoyed this one.. i know this feeling well.. merry holidays to you dear friend, thanks for putting up with me for so many years.. you continue to delight and inspire, and always will.. big hugs

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2012-12-28 09:16 PM

Helen~  I do thank you for your kind words and encouragement over the years.
I hope 2013 is good to you, and that you find peace in the days to come.
Love and hugs to you, Lady Sunday~

Richy~  Thank you for all the nice things you said, you warm my heart in so many ways.
I also want to thank you for always being here, even when you're not.

It is the most pleasant surprise when you return to these blue pages.
I wish you nothing but the best in New Year.  Warm hugs, always~

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

11 posted 2012-12-29 04:40 PM

Very touching and beautiful with just the right "tiny bubbles" of your talent, Blues.
Ida

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2012-12-31 01:01 PM

Thank you Ida for always taking the time to read and for leaving a nice reply.
Best to you in the New Year, wise and wonderful poetess.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

13 posted 2012-12-31 02:58 PM

Lori! I just wanted to come back and wish you a happy happy new year! I hope you have fun tonight and i also wish that this new year brings you and your loved ones, peace, great health, and much joy..

thanks for being such a special friend..

always, Richard (((You)))

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

14 posted 2012-12-31 06:31 PM

Thank you dear Richard! I wish you the same...you are such a gentle man and you're always so good to me. Thank you for everthing. I will be asleep before the ball drops, lost in a dream no doubt.

~warm hugs~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2012-12-31 10:56 PM

it sometimes just happens that way, huh? I feel this deeply.

Happy New Year to you Bluesygirl

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

16 posted 2012-12-31 11:10 PM

Hey Blues!
Love this... EVERY word, thought...
I can hear the poem speak.
Enjoyed,
Ms. E

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

17 posted 2013-01-01 01:13 AM

Nicley done! enjoyed! Happy New Year!
Kat >^..^<

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

18 posted 2013-01-01 09:40 AM

I know I responded before Lori, but I enjoyed it even more a second time around.
Actually I read it three times. Very touching. hugss!

~Victoria

nate15106
Junior Member

since 2013-01-01

Posts 11
Pittsburgh, PA

19 posted 2013-01-01 04:17 PM

Very nice. Enjoyed reading this alot

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

20 posted 2013-01-01 04:50 PM

"...we've forgotten how to dance". What a wonderful expression, my friend, wish I had thought of it, but really happy to seen it written by you.

Much enjoyed this read, and Loved the new pic (new to me anyway)...

j.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

21 posted 2013-01-01 05:10 PM

Magical and heady like a much-loved wine savoured long on the tongue, Blues.

Owl

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

22 posted 2013-01-01 05:51 PM

Dixie~So nice to see you here. Happy New Year to you.

Ms. ebony~ That was so nice of you to say so. Thanks so much.

Happy New Year to you too, Kat... lady of the Maine mountains.

V~ Sweet of you to stop by again.  Hope your New Year is happy.

Hello Nate~  Thanks for reading me and welcome to the blue sea~

Aww jw, you're so nice to me, thank you for all your support over the years and for sharing your poetry,
you are always a treat.  Best to you good poet, Sir~

Owl~  I wish you a very Happy New Year.  Thanks for the visit.

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

23 posted 2013-01-02 12:01 PM

I like being just dizzy enough to search out eyes in the world out there, so yeah.

Beautiful stuff, bluesy! Just awesome.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

24 posted 2013-01-02 11:44 AM

Hey you, thanks for the amazing reply.
I'm so happy you were here, soul drifter~

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

25 posted 2013-01-02 08:31 PM

So sensuous, but reflective of somewhere in the past? Words to infuse moods of romance and warmth, enjoyed reading your words as ever...and if i may say so...happy new year to you...

Goldenrose

music was my refuge.i could crawl into the spaces between the notes and curl my back to loneliness - Maya Angelou

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

26 posted 2013-01-03 07:08 PM

Back at you, Goldenrose!!
Always love seeing you here.
Thank you kind Sir~

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