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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2012-12-27 03:56 PM


She had a soft like neck
that seemed to run
around the base of his long arms
for her heart was settled
between the side of his sweater
and the tears of his face

Blonde, brown streaks
falling under the raptures of the wind
like the stolen rocks that lay underneath their home
as she, like a soft kiss, touched his eyes
rinsed the denim off his jeans
onto the flaccid floor

He used her lips for a slow smile
to keep the snow at bay
as her neck tilted into his chest
like the shallow cotton sweater
she wore over her white tee

He read the lines
from her eyes until a small scrap
of her nails seemed to scratch at the back of his neck
until the mark felt a nights hollow corner

Through the night
under a long silent sigh
he caught her eyes fall for a softened man
with his eyes tucked away like the snow covered plains of the midwest.

lips touching the the bottom
a radiant tide of the moon on their side
and for a moment, it all felt right
for a moment, a little rise of her eyes
came under the touch of his lips
the small windows heart
felt the truth of a dozen seeds
that shaded the bedroom wooden floor
to the soft kernels of her breasts
behind the curtains graceful stare.

[This message has been edited by Tomer (12-28-2012 03:01 PM).]

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2012-12-27 04:32 PM


Through the night
under a long silent sigh
he caught her eyes fall for a softened man
with his eyes tucked away like the plains of the midwest
as the snow covered the ground each year


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I love that verse! Your poetry is like a dream, Tomer.  
I'm always a fan!!!

Tomer
Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
2 posted 2012-12-27 08:02 PM


Blues-

I'm happy it took you there.....a dream is always a reality to me, sometimes.  Hope you're well.

Cheers

Tomer

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2012-12-28 02:14 PM


Fluid magic, Tomer!  

Owl

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
4 posted 2012-12-29 01:03 AM


it works like a dream, a fortunate meet, lived your images ans sweet words, thanks


yann

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
5 posted 2012-12-29 10:49 AM


Enjoyed the window view, Tomer.
Ms. E

Tomer
Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
6 posted 2013-01-01 07:10 PM


Owl-

Thank you, kindly.  Take care.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
7 posted 2013-01-01 07:10 PM


Yann-

I'm happy you enjoyed it.  I hope you're doing well, bud.  Take care.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
8 posted 2013-01-01 07:11 PM


Ms. E-

Happy you liked the picture.  Take care.

Cheers

Tomer

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