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Open Poetry #48

Red Sofa Blues

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-12-26 08:19 PM

Red Sofa Blues

Sarahs sleeping on my red sofa
not because its so comfortable
but because her boyfriend
made her feel so uncomfortable.

In the morning we'll go to the
Pacific Ocean to take a swim
then take a long walk on the beach
so Sarah can talk about him.

JamesLee
26December
2012

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2012-12-26 08:28 PM

Sounds like a nice time tomorrow with Sara.
Hope she feels better.

~V~

Nikola
Junior Member

since 2012-12-25

Posts 15

2 posted 2012-12-27 10:50 PM

The blues indeed.

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2012-12-28 01:50 PM

Everybody needs a good listener - it's a pity that so often boyfriend and listener are not one and the same.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2012-12-29 12:57 PM

very enjoyable reading, very simple and efficient words, applause

yann

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2012-12-29 11:06 AM

Enjoyed your poem, James,
Ms. E

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2013-01-05 01:57 AM

Thank you Victoria, Nikola, Honeybunch, 2islander2 and ebonygirl for the wonderful responses...James

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