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Spanish Jasmine Night
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Spanish Jasmine Night |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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He breathes the perfume of a Spanish Jasmine night, and is intoxicated by the exquisiteness of her beauty. There, he melt's in the candlelight of her eye's, eye's of incandescent blue, yet, changes to blue-violet whenever he whispers, "Esperanza." 'Tis Sangria lip's, flamingo pink, tempting him with passion, passionate fruit, aching to be kissed. Along the slender branch of her neck, he whisper's, word's of art. String's of guitar wind's, send a chill down the spine of the dark. Whilst the dreamy tempo of the star's Bolero across the sky, she surrender's unto him in the fragrance of the night. Still,she says, "She loves him" and then, "She loves him not" The dew upon the stem of morn, melt's, like chocolate sorbet, She says, "Please come here" and then, "Please go away" Perfume of a Spanish Jasmine night linger's in the light of dawn, and he again whisper's, "Esperanza." (inspired by my grand-daughter Esperanza) [This message has been edited by Victoria (12-26-2012 10:57 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
As delicious as dark chocolate...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you James for peeking in. Always nice to hear from you. ~V~ Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poem is lovely, and I adore the spanish flair and colorful images. Such a gorgeous name your grand-daughter has. A true beauty, V~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you lori and so nice to hear from you as always. Im glad you enjoyed. Hope you have a great new year!!! Hugss ~V~ |
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Nikola Junior Member
since 2012-12-25
Posts 15 |
Fantastic. This really invoked some pleasant thoughts. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
delicious and gorgeous, loved it, yann |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Nikola and yann for your lovely comments. So nice hearing from both of you. ~Victoria~ Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
okay, i need a spanish woman quick and some of that sangria too.. ! .. whew..... i feel like doing the tango and expressing some of my latin passion... Ole! haha.. what a fun and enticing dance of words this was.. Come to me Seniorita and take the rose from my mouth, while i whisk you across the floor to the beat of passions's smile and all things muy caliente!!  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Well, thank you Richy Im glad you enjoyed. Now you can get out your castanets and do the bolero when you are finished with the tango haa!! ~Victoria~ |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I really enjoyed this.thanks. jo |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This reminds me of my Grandaughters. Lovely, Victoria. ida |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Jo and Ida. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for peeking in. I wrote one Asian poem a while back and one with a French flavor and I thought I would do a Spanish poem this time, especially because of Esperanza. ~Victoria Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
haha oh Victoria you are soo funny haha.. i might have to borrow your castanets i lost mine, fishing lol.. thanks for the dances you're the best |
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