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Hitman612s
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since 2010-01-27
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Illinois,

0 posted 2012-12-26 06:14 PM


I was there when you said no, not right now, maybe tomorrow.
It was me you passed by, full of excuses and sorrow.
Why play safe, Because better safe than sorry?
Bull sh*t! Today’s moment right now is tomorrow’s yesterday story.
What kind of future would it be without mistakes from the past?
The reason you shouldn’t, is why you should, just get rid of the cast.  
The cast is your restraint, unable to move and grow.
Sure you’ll probably fall, but how else will you learn to go against the flow,
Against the grain, go left instead of right?
That dark path may just be missing YOUR light.
You already know this. You’ve heard it all before.
Stop living in fear, take chances and kick open my door.


Sincerely,

Life

© Copyright 2012 Daniel Allen Hitner - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2012-12-26 08:21 PM


Nice writing...really like the last line...James
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2012-12-27 01:26 PM


Brava Sir~  

Wonderful words to live by, and perhaps a resolution to apply to my life.

Thanks for this, you hit a good nerve!!  

Hitman612s
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since 2010-01-27
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Illinois,
3 posted 2012-12-27 02:26 PM


Thank you
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