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Open Poetry #48

being an astronaut

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

0 posted 2012-12-26 02:25 PM

I would have liked being an astronaut,
having an umbilical cord with mom shuttle
and sucking a milky star,

I would have seen the small earth
by repairing satellites by squeezing bolts
with a poetic precision,

I would have liked being an astronaut
to know you better, because you have too,
pretty face, the head in stars.....

KJOTT
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since 2012-12-26

Posts 87
Canada

1 posted 2012-12-26 10:37 PM

Made me smile...

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2012-12-27 01:38 AM

Delightful, Yann.

Owl

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2012-12-27 05:29 AM

Well, you like to travel and see new places, yann.I can see you as an astronaut.
Ida

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

4 posted 2012-12-27 12:38 PM

thanks KJOTT for reading and commenting with humor,

yann

2islander2
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by the sea

5 posted 2012-12-27 12:39 PM

thanks diana, for reading and commenting,

yann

2islander2
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by the sea

6 posted 2012-12-27 12:40 PM

thanks ida, travels in space must be awesome and unforgettable, i loved your humor,

yann

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

7 posted 2012-12-28 08:57 PM

interesting 'write' !

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

8 posted 2012-12-29 12:52 PM

thanks bruce for commenting

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

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California U.S.A

9 posted 2012-12-29 03:46 AM

and hair, black as
the void in space
a glistening comet

Enjoyed your poem Yann,
Ms. E

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