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Open Poetry #48
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Rollo
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since 2012-12-20
Posts 6
California
0 posted 2012-12-20 05:42 PM


Warm breath on my neck
Arms pulling me close to you
Now, everything slows
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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2012-12-21 10:12 AM

Your poem is soothing and so loving.

Nice~
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2012-12-23 09:01 PM

Very nice...I think my heartbeat is in fast motion when my honey pulls me close...James
2islander2
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by the sea
3 posted 2012-12-28 07:07 AM

exquisite sensation while reading,

have a nice day


yann
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