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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2012-12-14 02:15 PM

Haunting winds whisper your name
as I bathe in the breeze of magnolia.
Purple flowers bloom in the rain,
beneath the brilliance of stars.
A bouquet, shining brightly
a celestial bouquet,
blue diamonds in the mounting of night.
But your love was as wondrous
as a purplish pink diamond
within the golden band of the moon.
Wondrous as a Perfect
Brazilian sunset,
kissing softly the ocean adieu.
Your image in purple baquettes of the rain,
Haunting winds whisper your name.

Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can.
-- Danny Kaye

[This message has been edited by Victoria (12-16-2012 12:04 PM).]

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2012-12-15 12:22 PM

A beauty!!

Great write.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2012-12-15 05:01 PM

Well, thank you JL. for that nice compliment and for visiting today.

~Victoria~

Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can.
-- Danny Kaye

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2012-12-19 11:41 AM

The scent of your poems is so fresh and so feminine. The tropical exotic nature of your work is really beautiful. Makes me want to go there. xo

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2012-12-19 02:10 PM

Thank you for your sweet comments Lori. Actually I was hinting for a pink diamond for Christmas.

~Victoria~

mellowdown
Junior Member

since 2012-12-19

Posts 30
usa

5 posted 2012-12-19 04:07 PM

As a caress moves the soul your
words stream echoes like a river,

a poem is a sigh
a melody of song
a musical lullaby

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2012-12-19 05:28 PM

The moccasin winds sing in the moonlight.

Thank you mellowdown for your lovely words.

~Victoria~

Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can.
-- Danny Kaye

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

7 posted 2012-12-19 06:08 PM

I loved this poem! Very simple, yet sweet! Much enjoyed Victoria!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2012-12-19 07:15 PM

Thank you so much Kate, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks for peeking in.

~V~

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

9 posted 2012-12-20 02:26 PM

Your words skipped across the heart like fingers on piano keys.. so lovely.. glad i got to enjoy this, thanks for share..

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2012-12-20 03:17 PM

Thank you Richy for your lovely comments, so glad you enjoyed. Very Nice to meet you also.

~Victoria~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

11 posted 2012-12-21 08:23 PM

Ah, in the air, the scent of Victoria-roses...

lovely, my friend.

j.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

12 posted 2012-12-22 08:41 AM

Thank you Jimmy and happy holidays to you and yours.

~V~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2012-12-23 09:07 PM

Like diamonds, like diamonds in the sky...James

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

14 posted 2012-12-23 09:14 PM

Nice to hear from you James as always.

~V~

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