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Open Poetry #48

the Grace of Forgiveness

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-12-12 08:03 PM

The Grace of Forgiveness

Love is
a strong wind
caressing a multitude
of bodies gently.

Love is
a total immersion
in a hard falling rain
without the benefit
of an umbrella.

Love is two people
loving each other
thru hearthrobs
a number of heartaches
many mistakes
even some heartbreak
upon the way to
the grace of forgiveness.

JamesLee
11December
2012

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2012-12-12 08:13 PM

Yes if you really love someone you can forgive anything. Nicely done James.

~V~

Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can.
-- Danny Kaye

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

2 posted 2012-12-12 09:34 PM

Nicely done, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2012-12-14 07:20 PM

Thank you Victoria and Kat for the nice responses...James

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