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Open Poetry #48
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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2012-12-12 03:30 PM


She used to fall underneath a small saturday
that rested on the shoulders
of the soft side of autumn road

Hailmary;
underneath the rosewood
the burning wood of the northeast road

There was a soft current
soft wave under her skinned tank top
where the river seemed to stroll
and the runners seemed to stare
underneath their sweat

The tall stone wood building
where the heart roamed
and the chatter came
from a soft whisper
of the ebony based floor

Where the buffalo roamed
she used to sit up and stare
for a scene to right
a light to share her heart

A small seeded room
just in the corner
where the buffalo roamed
past her thinly veiled screen window
onto her lowly dimmed bedroom floor.

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2012-12-17 11:15 PM


Nice...James
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2012-12-19 11:35 AM


Love the backdrop behind the screen and everything else you wrote, to perfection I might add!  

Your title is classic!!!

Such a treat to read!

Tomer
Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
3 posted 2012-12-22 07:28 PM


Appreciate the love, James. Take care.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
4 posted 2012-12-22 07:29 PM


Blues-

A pleasure to read your comments.  Happy you enjoyed it so much.

Cheers

Tomer

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