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Open Poetry #48

Sun Moon and Earth

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2012-11-30 08:14 PM

The moon lingers as the earth
loses her attraction for the sun,
as it peeks over the horizon
with a pink particle glow.

While the moon covets
the body of the earth,
tides begin to rise
in the gloaming.
The fickled earth
waits patiently,
the moon rises higher
rocking the waves,
to the peak of their crest
in the menage a trois
upon the sea bed.

Gypsy ribbons..lavender gray,
and midnight blue
floats gracefully
across the twilight skies.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Ethern
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since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

1 posted 2012-12-01 10:24 AM

nicely done

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2012-12-01 11:49 AM

Thanks Ethern, and thats a nice photo of you too.

Love: A temporary insanity curable by marriage. by Ambrose Bierce

Ethern
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since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

3 posted 2012-12-01 07:49 PM

well thank you very much. i like your photo too. it's lovely. are you very photogenic?

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2012-12-01 08:57 PM

I was at a wedding in that photo a couple months ago Ethern, so I might be more photogenic then usual. ha

Ethern
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since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

5 posted 2012-12-02 04:12 PM

a wedding would be an appropriate occasion to display such a sincere and delightful smile

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

6 posted 2012-12-02 04:18 PM

I like the concept of this one. I wouldn't have thought of it at all.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2012-12-02 05:30 PM

Thank you Nan,I dont know what made me think of it either ha.

Love: A temporary insanity curable by marriage. by Ambrose Bierce

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