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Open Poetry #48

Sarah's Back Around

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-11-28 11:47 PM

Sarah's Back Around

Sarah's back in town again,
my God Sarah where have you been
you look like an old Chevy pick-up
worn out but comfortable enough.
I'd still like to cruise
around the block with you,
plop yourself down on the red sofa
and I'll make you a brew.
What's that?
You don't drink anymore,
at least not since last week
when you lost the man
that you love and adore.
Sarah I know exactly how you feel
in a dream world as if love isn't real.
Here, cry on my shoulder
and we'll both feel a tad better,
its nice to see you again Sarah
lets spend some more time together.

JamesLee
25November
2012

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2012-11-29 07:36 AM

No friends like old friends James. I enjoyed reading about Sarah.

~V~

Ethern
Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

2 posted 2012-11-29 06:12 PM

a scenario i find familiar.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2012-11-30 09:46 AM

Well, the first few lines had me spewing my coffee...

I had a girlfriend who reminded me of
a '58 Buick but if I had ever said that to her or anyone we knew,
she would have run me over, forwards and backwards... without honking.

But I did enjoy the read, JamesLee!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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