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Open Poetry #48

A Women's Fury

ken206573
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0 posted 2012-11-27 11:10 AM

In the distance storm clouds gather
No calm, no peace in this matter
She bares cold rain and heavy hail
Bashing, smashing a tearful wail
Oh do not dare try to flatter
In the distance storm clouds gather

[This message has been edited by ken206573 (11-27-2012 11:44 AM).]

Victoria

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1 posted 2012-11-27 11:25 AM

Oh yes a woman scorned. You described it well. Enjoyed.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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2 posted 2012-11-27 11:32 AM

Time to make yourself scarce, that's what time it is.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ken206573
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3 posted 2012-11-27 12:14 PM

Thanks for your comments, happy that you enjoyed it.

Ethern
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on a plane

4 posted 2012-11-29 06:19 PM

a very accurate depiction, in my opinion.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

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By the Seaside

5 posted 2012-12-04 06:59 PM

No such thing as a perfect storm!

Good on ya, Ken~

ken206573
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6 posted 2012-12-06 01:01 PM

Thank you for all your comments, happy to see that you all enjoyed the poem. True there is never a perfect storm like a women's scorn is what my sister's tell me.

JL
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since 2004-04-01

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Texas, USA

7 posted 2012-12-06 06:04 PM

Nice writing ken.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

ken206573
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8 posted 2012-12-07 11:15 AM

Thanks for stopping by and given it a read.

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