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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813
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carefree the weight of my worry lifts and for a moment or two my feet feel light enough to skip |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I can feel the joy in your skipping. Nice write!! JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
. . . and what a wonderful feeling that is, Karen . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
always an especially grand feelin' indeed! [unfortunately, some of us haven't been blessed with that particular experience in way too many years.] |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
JL thank you Jerry yep, funny thing was it hit me when driving in and I don't think cars can 'skip' lol second, yep I do know that, has been many years since I could have written this |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Very happy to hear it, luminosity! Owl |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
You made me smile. Thank you for this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Keep doing what you are doing. Enjoyed. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh yes, to feel the weight of the world fall away is all that!! Perfectly said and done!! |
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