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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2012-11-18 09:31 PM


Yesterdays & Forever

Yesterdays...I watch the woman
I love sitting under a Plumeria tree
looking off into the sunset,
she will be leaving me soon
but she hasn't told me yet,
upon the day she goes away
we hold and kiss like
everything is the same
and as I drop her off
at the airport she probably
said "goodbye James."

Forever...time passes
feelings diminish
and lovers go away,
still love lives on
inside a broken heart
you can't take
love away.

JamesLee
17November
2012

  

  

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Victoria
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1 posted 2012-11-19 08:15 AM


So true, true love stays in the heart forever. Good one James.

luminosity
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2 posted 2012-11-19 10:08 AM


I like the way you wove the future and the present, nicely written
JL
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Texas, USA
3 posted 2012-11-19 10:18 AM


"you can't take
love away."

Nice writing, James!
Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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