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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2012-11-17 07:29 PM



A Woman that Made Me


In a heartbeat
I would go
as far as I could
if I could meet
a woman like her again,
a woman that made me feel comfortable
with the man that I am.


JamesLee
14November
2012


  


  

  

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Victoria
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1 posted 2012-11-17 07:45 PM


She sounds like a keeper James. Enjoyed

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JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-11-17 08:20 PM


Keep looking.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
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3 posted 2012-11-19 07:38 PM


Nice thoughts and writing!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2012-11-24 08:11 PM


Thanks Victoria, Jerry and JL for reading and responding...James
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