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Ethern
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0 posted 2012-11-15 01:52 PM



the shepherd counts the sheep
but it is the fold that sleeps
under a wolfs wool

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1 posted 2012-11-15 02:29 PM


Nice one Ethern. My brother would appreciate this too as he is a Deacon.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Michael
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2 posted 2012-11-17 09:47 AM


Amen!  Great write, hope it opens a few eyes.

Michael

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3 posted 2012-12-03 12:31 PM


You're right Ethren. Good one.
                         Ida

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4 posted 2012-12-03 04:01 PM


powerful!
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5 posted 2012-12-06 02:15 PM


Wow that's deep nad powerful. My padtor would love to hear this...might tell just that. Happy Holidays
Ethern
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6 posted 2012-12-10 02:19 AM


maybe your pastor would like "Sunday Syllabus" too
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