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Open Poetry #48

For The Birds

Ethern
Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

0 posted 2012-11-13 02:46 PM

surveilling the range from aloft,
circling the loops with rounds,
the welkin baron aviates
o'er vale and dale to sound:

slalems through, drafting blue
with an inscrutable scowling frown
in froward spirits: a forlorn visage
glowers indelibly down.

[This message has been edited by Ethern (11-13-2012 09:12 PM).]

Ethern
Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

1 posted 2012-11-13 02:47 PM

very special thanks to my good friend Merriam.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-11-13 03:54 PM

Hah! I LOVE this line . . .

quote:
glowering indelibly down.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Ethern
Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

3 posted 2012-11-13 09:17 PM

sorry i had to edit that line. is it just me or did i fail epicly on the first draft? still not totally satisfied with this one...

[This message has been edited by Ethern (11-13-2012 10:35 PM).]

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