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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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She walked in the ivory sands ofWaikiki as he watched her from afar her platinum hair brushed by the wind in the plumeria breeze of her beauty she strolled the path toward the spell of his direction the brush of the sun painted her curves with a generous caramel tan from angelic face to tip of her toes she was the woman the goddess of his dreams she smiled within the thought of his embrace as their eyes locked with the key of desire as her presence left him breathless with passion this Dominican man with emerald eyes his bronze body did hypnotize he took her hand and melted within reflections, sapphire blue she fell in love with this man this man who belonged to another she kissed his lips for the last time and they tearfully said their good byes she held close their newborn baby their daughter with emerald eyes. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Aw, sad poem, yes Victoria, but when you dig deeper into the words of it you realize that although it has a sad ending there were smiles even then. For from the first kiss to the birth of their daughter, to the last kiss, their time together was magical, and you can never take that away from either of them. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Ethern Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 150on a plane |
nice |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Yes it was eighteen years ago my daughter had a daugher with emerald eyes. A gorgeous grandaugher she is. She has seen her father a couple times since then and of course they do the text thing. Thanks for reading Jerry A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thanks for peeking in Ethern. Appreciate you reading today. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
So sad but with a great ending that was, in fact, an even greater beginning. You have given expression to a true story superbly! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Honeybunch. Im glad you enjoyed my words and thank you for peeking in. ~V~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you James. I use to live in Hawaii, thats how my daughter ended up there. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sad but intriguing story. Ida |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so much for stopping by Ida and commenting today. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (11-30-2012 12:00 PM).] |
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