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luminosity
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0 posted 2012-11-08 05:04 PM


prayers for the reasons why
#7  Heavenly spaces

Inside my faith I climb
drawing Heaven
inside with me
and You Lord, over.
My cover.

Your presence
the sweet waft of peace
surrounds this small space.

Lord I needn't now ask
for You to take the tremble
it dares not task Your presence
tears fall
clearing my perspective...

[This message has been edited by luminosity (11-09-2012 02:28 PM).]

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-11-08 05:17 PM


See! The tremble isn't as trembly as before and you are seeing with more clarity. Give yourself some credit.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

luminosity
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2 posted 2012-11-08 05:19 PM


it is hard to assume a posture of credit when one is cowering...sigh
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2012-11-10 12:44 PM


Enjoyed...James
Victoria
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4 posted 2012-11-10 08:38 AM


We all need peace in this stressful world that we live in.

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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