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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2012-11-08 03:56 PM



The Sweetness of November

The silk lady called me
From Hong Kong late tonite
She said she was thinking of me
And she wanted to hold me tight
She said November musn't go by
Without us looking into each others eyes
I remembered how her kiss
Melted into my lips
I remembered calling out her name
In desire of her bliss
I wondered what had changed
Normally it would be me seeking her
With my love to proclaim
Tomorrow morning
I'm booking a flight
The sweet thoughts
Of the woman I love
Sleeping with me tonite.

JamesLee
08November
2012


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-11-08 04:15 PM


Happy reunion.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

luminosity
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2 posted 2012-11-09 02:01 PM


this leaves a smile on my lips and puts a pat on hope's back...there is love and such still alive and thriving
Victoria
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3 posted 2012-11-09 02:14 PM


Im jealous James ha. Enjoyed reading your romantic words.

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
4 posted 2012-11-09 02:34 PM


exquisite and hopeful, enjoyed,


yann

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2012-11-17 07:22 PM


Thank you Jerry, luminosity, Victoria and 2islander2 for reading and responding...James
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