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Open Poetry #48

Zeus's Zeal

Ethern
Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

0 posted 2012-11-06 01:12 AM

blazing from the skyline
burning to the earth
broken are the stones now
thrown up is the dirt

cleaved unto the bedrock
the mountain lies in twain
surging are the deep springs
rushing up to meet the rain

glory for an instant borne
in awe of simple hearts
leaves grieved at last illumined souls
with wisdom to depart

Lady Goodman
Member

since 2012-10-04

Posts 193

1 posted 2012-11-06 04:04 AM

I do love glory given to the gods, so trust I enjoyed this.

I wish there had been more, though.

It read (to me, of course) like a teasing taste plate, served mid-course.

Very pleasing to the palate, though. I hope there shall be more to come.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2012-11-06 04:05 AM

Sounds like our presidential election, and it's not over yet!!

j.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 2012-11-11 06:39 AM

Nicely done. The wrath and power of Zeus are beautifully portrayed here.

Michael

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2012-12-03 07:37 PM

Nicely done.
Ida

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