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Arms of the Night |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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The enchanting arms of the night holding me close the way you did back then unveiling depths of passion while the warm breath of ebony winds runs his fingers through moonlight hair as a voyeur secretly peeks behind the silkin web of seduction listening to your whisper words slither and crawl over my skin kissing celibate lips invisible ink promises tattooed upon my memory an image of you embraces the cleavage of the night. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Last line was a good one, Victoria. It was a perfect way to end this very sensuous poem as a matter of fact. I like this poem. It is a little different than I've seen you pen before. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Jerry,Yes I have written quite a bit poetry on the darker side. Glad you enjoyed it and for peeking in. ~Victoria~
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loved it...wouldn't call it "dark" particularly... love the pic too, which bespeaks "thrill of life", and not a dark one either. j. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
More of a dark romance I guess. Thanks again Jimmy, and for peeking in. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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