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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-11-02 07:56 AM




inebriated on cheap California burgundy
careening from your wide open
kisses
your damp body surging
against my own on the floor
though we tried
couldn't make it to the bed
so we gorged ourselves
hands and fingers, tongues
feasting on each other's sensuous delights
the last of our breath
lethargic now
all tangled up with clothes we shed
we slept
on the floor, sated
the heady taste of body parts on our lips
we lay
dreaming of Love Potion #9
and of the over indulging
of kerzillion of kisses

©September 17, 2012  Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

© Copyright 2012 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Victoria
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1 posted 2012-11-02 09:48 AM


I guess ill have to start drinking ha
hopefully I can make it to the bed. Good one Jerry

~Victoria~

"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-11-02 09:57 AM


Well, as the old line goes, Victoria, "Candy is dandy, but liquor is quicker."

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and comment. You can be assured it is very much appreciated . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2012-11-04 07:45 AM


Hot as ever!  You haven't lost your touch
    lori

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-11-04 07:48 AM


. . . and I hope I never lose that touch, Lori. Appreciate you going through my poems this morning.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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