the soft rose of the western road

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Open Poetry #48

the soft rose of the western road

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2012-10-31 02:28 AM

She had a soft rose heart
but it never bent for a mans touch

A body that wrestles with each curve
for a silent zip up to the button of her pants
between the small space
up to her naval
where her breasts could afford
the low tango of the seas wind
as her hips remained focus
on that small region

A soft rose
under the wrong field road
of a western road that
led to her grandpas old home

She was delicate
as the underneath current
of her stockings could breathe
along the ocean sea
and still feel them rise
along the blaze of an august sunrise

A mans touch against a soft rose heart
withering heights
backstage, left, past the porches quiet echo

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2012-10-31 08:43 AM

This is a fabulous poem. I love it. I read it three times.

~Victoria~

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

2 posted 2012-11-05 04:51 PM

Victoria-

I appreciate the warm comments. I'm happy you enjoyed it so much...take care.

Cheers

Tomer

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2012-11-12 02:28 PM

This cant be lost yet, back to the top.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2012-11-28 11:34 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Ethern
Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 150
on a plane

5 posted 2012-11-29 06:16 PM

nice read.

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

6 posted 2012-11-30 02:14 AM

Thanks, James. Appreciate the support...hope you're well.

Cheers

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

7 posted 2012-11-30 02:14 AM

Thanks, Ethern...happy you enjoyed. Take care

Cheers

Tomer

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