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luminosity
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0 posted 2012-10-30 04:45 PM


# 2.  ground breaking

about a year ago it started
the tremble I mean
but the reason
well that is what the digging is for
and I am counting on Your help
I cannot do it by myself

I know sometimes it is not and
sometimes it is more
not means busy
and more usually means
I am not alone

Lord help me,
heavy stones and I
have built a wall between me
and the reason
I have effectively deadened the pain
but now the need to see
beyond is calling to me
something long ago buried
has need of release

[This message has been edited by luminosity (10-31-2012 11:10 AM).]

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-10-30 05:02 PM


Between you and the one you are talking to will take you where you want to go. I have no doubt.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

luminosity
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2 posted 2012-10-30 05:04 PM


I hope you are right, thank you
Sunshine
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3 posted 2012-12-14 09:51 AM


I've always believed that when one "puts it out there" for others to see, the prayers multiply.




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