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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-10-30 12:45 PM


Catching a Fallen Star

It was
easier to feel
love and to feel loved
when I thought I was in love,
while I had a pocketfull
of hopes and dreams;
I believed that I could do anything,
now the opposite has occured,
does such a thing as love exist,
I'm not even sure,
for now my thoughts on love will smolder,
in the future if love does exist
I welcome love to tap me on the shoulder.
Catch a fallen star
and put it in your pocket...

JamesLee
30October
2012




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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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1 posted 2012-10-30 08:07 AM


VERY well said!

[I KNOW the feelin' ... way too well]

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2012-10-30 08:11 AM


Yeah, we like to think love dies within our hearts until our eyes catch a lovely vision and off to the races we go again.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Victoria
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3 posted 2012-10-30 09:14 AM


Everyone has been there James. You will find that soulmate one day when you least expect it.

~Victoria~

"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



r v wooo
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since 2007-08-07
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4 posted 2012-10-30 09:42 AM


James...yes, it does exist...and tho our reactions to it may differ, we all experience feelings ...good, bad or indifferent and that goes for the intendee of our love as well. Love can become a game of chance...sometimes we win...sometimes we lose...and sometimes there are those who give up and never play the game again.
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