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EmmaRose
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0 posted 2012-10-28 11:07 AM




In the end
just you and me

kicking up
September's fallen

the reign of leaves
that guide our way

the golds that gift
the King, his Queen

finally
what became

was meant to be.

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (10-29-2012 01:19 PM).]

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-10-28 11:26 AM


This is all that needs to be said concerning the King and his Queen . . .
quote:
what became
was meant to be.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2012-10-29 12:48 PM


Love the simple elegance of this, EmmaRose.
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r v wooo
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3 posted 2012-10-29 02:29 PM


The sweetness of a rose..."Storming"...by any other name...still smells or tastes or feels as sweet...interesting poem, emma rose! RV
jwesley
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4 posted 2012-10-29 07:02 PM


Very very nicely written, my friend,.


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JamesMichael
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5 posted 2012-10-30 12:40 PM


Wonderful...James
Victoria
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6 posted 2012-10-30 09:17 AM


What is meant to be sometimes is not what we want it to be. Enjoyed your thoughts.

~Victoria~

"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



luminosity
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7 posted 2012-11-02 05:27 PM


hmmm love this...what a wonderful write
EmmaRose
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8 posted 2012-11-03 08:07 PM


thank you for stopping by to read and comment
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