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ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
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0 posted 2012-10-25 01:52 PM



Orange,
Red,
Green,
Blue
Violet,

colours love,
colors love,

But will you?
will you love me?
when all these colours
turn to ghastly grey?

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OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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1 posted 2012-10-25 03:23 PM


Grey, in any sense of the word, doesn't need to be ghastly - in fact greys can be beautiful in their varying shades.  

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Amberzlynnc
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since 2010-08-24
Posts 229
New Jersey
2 posted 2012-10-25 11:23 PM


And that is what true love is all about- loving in the colorful, happy times along with the dismal grey as well. :-)
Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

3 posted 2012-10-26 12:25 PM


Ghastly?
I would hope not, but then I started young and  have 50+ years of experience. We can grow into such things.  
But your point is well taken.

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